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my composition
Orientation: This is what i written...
It was a hot Tuesday afternoon and the school bell had just rung. It was dismissal time. all the children lined up outside their classrooms quickly. Some of them went off to take the ublic buses or the train home. My sister and I were walking home as our house is near our school.
Complication
When we walked past block 20A, two boys startedd throwing some eggs at my sister and I . One of the boys was covering his eyes with a mask. while the other was covering his mouth with a similar mask. I accidently stepped on the eggs and fell onto the floor. My head was blooding profusely. When my sister saw blood flowing from my head, she quickly took out her handphone and called for the ambulance. When the two boys saw blood on the floor, they quickly stopped throwing the eggs.
Resolution
My form teacher who was nearby quickly took out his handkerchief and tried to stop my blood from flowing. After ten minutes., the siren of the ambulance and police car were heard. The paramedics exmined my injuries and put =me an a strecher and send me to the hospital, while my sister told the police what had happened.
The policemen went up to the police to the second floor and arrested the two boys for throwing eggs down their flats.
My sister called our parents whiloe she rushed to the hosptal. My parentss and my sister waited for me at the operation room for hours. After about six hours later, i came out of the operation room. The doctor said that I was out of danger. After my family heardthat, they were relived. The doctor also told them that i had to stay in the hospital for a few days for observation.
Codar
A few days later, I was discharged. I was very happy to be at home as it was more comfortable. The food that my mother cooked was mich more better than the hospital's.As for the boys , they were fine$1000 each for thorwing the eggs.i think they had learnt this lessons and dared not throws eggs down their flat again.
It was a hot Tuesday afternoon and the school bell had just rung. It was dismissal time. all the children lined up outside their classrooms quickly. Some of them went off to take the ublic buses or the train home. My sister and I were walking home as our house is near our school.
Complication
When we walked past block 20A, two boys startedd throwing some eggs at my sister and I . One of the boys was covering his eyes with a mask. while the other was covering his mouth with a similar mask. I accidently stepped on the eggs and fell onto the floor. My head was blooding profusely. When my sister saw blood flowing from my head, she quickly took out her handphone and called for the ambulance. When the two boys saw blood on the floor, they quickly stopped throwing the eggs.
Resolution
My form teacher who was nearby quickly took out his handkerchief and tried to stop my blood from flowing. After ten minutes., the siren of the ambulance and police car were heard. The paramedics exmined my injuries and put =me an a strecher and send me to the hospital, while my sister told the police what had happened.
The policemen went up to the police to the second floor and arrested the two boys for throwing eggs down their flats.
My sister called our parents whiloe she rushed to the hosptal. My parentss and my sister waited for me at the operation room for hours. After about six hours later, i came out of the operation room. The doctor said that I was out of danger. After my family heardthat, they were relived. The doctor also told them that i had to stay in the hospital for a few days for observation.
Codar
A few days later, I was discharged. I was very happy to be at home as it was more comfortable. The food that my mother cooked was mich more better than the hospital's.As for the boys , they were fine$1000 each for thorwing the eggs.i think they had learnt this lessons and dared not throws eggs down their flat again.
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